1. What was your group's feedback?

My group got many criticisms. For example;
-It was too choppy, meaning it didn't flow fluently,
-Too much swearing,
-We need to know what to say to each other,
-Stand in character.


2. What do you want to work on? Give suggestions on what you will do.

The main thing my group and I need to work on is mine, Izzy's and Jade's scene. Because it doesn't run fluently, also we keep on freezing and not knowing what to do/say on stage.
To improve this scene we're going to keep on rehearsing it and think of what we think our characters would be doing. What I mean by this is we though about what our individuals characters are like, for me we decided that my character; Sarah, is a responsible, caring, hard working person which nicely contrasts with Izzy's character; Nancy.
I would also like to work the fluency of the piece, so it seems more natural.

What I personally need to work on is standing and walking in character because at the moment I'm still doing all of my characterisations in the way that I walk and stand, and I just need to remember to stay in character at all times on stage.